write my personal statement. The essay should include why I want to become a doctor, without using those words. My story needs to tell why want to become a doctor, things overcome, and how that motivated you. How you was able to OVERCOME the things went through. The essay shouldn’t be a pity essay. The goal is not for the admission office to feel bad. The goal is for them to see how you overcome struggles and how this will show even when you get to medical school. It should also portray passion for patients and my community. Your love for people. mentioned going to Ghana and interning and wanting to start nonprofit organization to help mothers and newborns. was also a secretary for a child sexual assault organization.