Revise the thesis statement below. Your revised thesis should be at least 200 words. Explain the revisions you made, and why you made them in 100 words or more
What is self-care? Self-care is getting more and more important nowadays. Self-care is about making a commitment to stay healthy and balanced as a regular practice of any activity that we can do to take care of and pay attention to ourselves mentally, emotionally and physically. Self-care is also psychological, social, financial, spiritual, environmental and professional. We are all humans with feelings and we know ourselves better than anyone. Today self-care is a new discipline, a new empowerment which is the process of becoming stronger and more confident. Both self-care and empowerment can improve everyday life. Audre Lorde with her book A Burst of Lightand Gloria Anzaldua with How to Tame a Wild Tongue are two feminists who wrote about the power of self-care and empowerment.